2. I think everything is okay alrdy, it has a story book illustration kinda feel to it,
3. I think the logo's too small and should be situated higher on the corner of the border instead on the inside of the picture.
4. No need to add more flowers.
I have one comment though. For your font for the word 'Night', I don't think it's suitable at all because the line running across above the alphabets resembles Hindi alphabets and not Persian. So, it's a little misleading. It's not Hindustani, it's supposed to be Persian right?
Therefore, I feel you should choose a font which looks more Arabic inspired with the dots and extended lower cases, like jawi or Arabic (because Farsi shares the same alphabets as Arabic.)
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1. the colors,
2. I think everything is okay alrdy, it has a story book illustration kinda feel to it,
3. I think the logo's too small and should be situated higher on the corner of the border instead on the inside of the picture.
4. No need to add more flowers.
I have one comment though. For your font for the word 'Night', I don't think it's suitable at all because the line running across above the alphabets resembles Hindi alphabets and not Persian. So, it's a little misleading. It's not Hindustani, it's supposed to be Persian right?
Therefore, I feel you should choose a font which looks more Arabic inspired with the dots and extended lower cases, like jawi or Arabic (because Farsi shares the same alphabets as Arabic.)
Comment on mine? Thanks :)