1. Nice colors! 2. The texture is nicely done 8D and i think it is enough. 3.Why did u make the "will" smaller and white in color? I think it'll look nicer if use only 2 colors maximum... well that's only me~~ 8D the "you" somehow doesn't blend in well...maybe u wanna make it stand out... so i dunno xD can't pick other font ke?
3. typo wise, choice of font and arrangement of texts can be better. im not sure what exactly is ur concept about or who is your target audience. the "you" punya red too bright edy and it's overlapping the question mark. any reason why it is in 3 colours?
other than that, i like the illustrations ler. :DDDD retard penguins hahaha. jk. good luck hani!
ifa>> ahhh im so bad in typo lahh TAT i made the "will" small cause wanted to make the "YOU" stands out..orait 2 colors only and chang font for "YOU", i'll change those then
orilia>> warghh, im also bad in typo composition TAT i know something is wrong with the typo but dunno how to fix it >w> maybe i just tiru some composition from reference DX ok toning down the red..check! LOL retard penguins is LOVE XDD
and ya guys thanks alot lahh!! wahh seniorsss XDD *bow bow*
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1. yup.
2. I think texture is nicer. It's ok.
3. Special composition.
2. i like it with texture.
3. i think it can be better...
chimeg>> the typo rite, would it be good if i write it on my own?
2. The texture is nicely done 8D and i think it is enough.
3.Why did u make the "will" smaller and white in color? I think it'll look nicer if use only 2 colors maximum... well that's only me~~ 8D the "you" somehow doesn't blend in well...maybe u wanna make it stand out... so i dunno xD can't pick other font ke?
yeap~
overall...very cute + nice! OwO/
2. texture is enough edy.
3. typo wise, choice of font and arrangement of texts can be better. im not sure what exactly is ur concept about or who is your target audience. the "you" punya red too bright edy and it's overlapping the question mark. any reason why it is in 3 colours?
other than that, i like the illustrations ler. :DDDD retard penguins hahaha. jk. good luck hani!
orilia>> warghh, im also bad in typo composition TAT i know something is wrong with the typo but dunno how to fix it >w> maybe i just tiru some composition from reference DX ok toning down the red..check! LOL retard penguins is LOVE XDD
and ya guys thanks alot lahh!! wahh seniorsss XDD *bow bow*